Sunday, May 31, 2009

Short Story from Ack

Hi, this week in writing I had to make up a short story based on a picture that they gave us. The picture was of a girl with plaits in a t-shirt and jeans holding up a trophy (like a big cup with one handle on each side). In the picture it looks like the cup is shaking. Anyway, here is my story!


BOOM BOOM

On a clear and wacky Wednesday I went to the BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM competition and every competitor had a 500 wide stick of dynamite. Eva went out to the front of the stage with her stick of dynamite, gasoline, lava and black powder. She held the magnifiying glass to the sun (which was coming in through the sky-light) and Ka-boooooooooooooooooom! Eva's boom was the loudest so she won the trophy. After the fire brigade left I went home.

THE END

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Loved your story hat a wonderful way to win first prise